Poems! hehehehe!!!
The other day I was going banana! Since I have never written a poem I was like why don't I write one now! Yeh, I know! Sometimes I am in this weird mood! I mean at last, nobody can judge me for the so called poems I write! ;)
I know that they might sound funny but what the heck! I'll post them! :D
Losing it!
I wanna write, I wanna sing
I wanna rap, I wanna go bling bling!
Whether you like it or not
I am not here to make you feel hot
I wanna speak up my mind
& its for you to understand it & find
Whether it was you I was writing abt
Or another person, will ya find out?
A crazy world that we live in
like a journey ending up where they began
Sometimes I go wild, sometimes im cool
But does that say anything abt me or my school?
7 Person(s) Gone Banana!:
Hehe, cool poem =)
good with the rhyming.
I liked these lines:
"I wanna speak up my mind
& its for you to understand it & find
A crazy world that we live in
like a journey ending up where they began".
Keep 'em coming, Poet! =P =D heh.
Tc,
Senorita.
looool like that alote
waiting for new nice things that u always come up with
Senorita:: Thanks :D
You made my day! Wooohooooooooooo!!!
I mean getting such a compliment from a poet like you is sth I didn't see coming ;) Well I did :D :p hahahahaaa!!!
pritty_sicko:: Thanks :D
I wanna write, I wanna sing
I wanna rap, I wanna go bling bling!
Whether you like it or not
I am not here to make you feel hot
I wanna speak up my mind
& its for you to understand it & find
LOl you wanna do alot don't you?:) neway i oved the poem its hilarous ,fun and well written:) Keep it up.. :D:D
I LOVE IT!!!
Love
Miss Monk =D
Is it?!! Woooooohoooooooooooooo!!! >>> dancing the victory dance! :D :D
Well I absolutely have no idea on how to write poems but I always wanted to write! Be it a poem, thoughts, a column in a magazine or even a post in my blog! lol! Finally I am doing it! & I'm enjoying myself very much!
I need your conctructive comments to improve myself ;)
Thank you for your sweet words, dear :)
^^^ lool! :D
Thanks! :p
best poem ever...:D:D:D lol im joking...but u kno i still love u
lol :P
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